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gimmie till monday

No problem, breh. I'll probably post before that.

Oh... Forgot about this one. I'll post sometime today.

haha me too bro, ill try an drop by tommoro busy as shit

Bumping to remind me

"Class" is in session, here's a (lesson kid, peep)... I got groupies, if you "turned a fan on" you were (“catchin’ a breeze“)
There’s “no time” to teach Dan all the “basics“, so like his name I'll (“end him with ee’s“)*

Beat him with glee, -audios- must be wack when you already sound fucking (gay in ya raps)
They’d rather hear my shotty-blow than listen when “D talks” unless it's (Dre on the track)**

Thinkin' your raps are (astounding? This geeks hardly)… (amounting to heat, I’ll be)…
(Jus pounding his weak bars, please,) in this we’ll “see D drop” with no (“album release party”)

When it comes to dope, they (yellin‘ for Cas in ya town) while I’m im(pelling ya ass to the ground)
My punches jus keep hittin’ “re up” like (“sellin’ the last of a pound”)***

His (shitty ass punches) are (pretty redundant), crying about everything and (bitching in public)..
So I told him to be the “bigger man“, I see he took it to heart...neck…(titties and stomach)!****


*Basics as in ABC’s
**One of Dre’s CD’s was Detox
***Dealers sell by the pound, when you run out you re up which means stock up on another pound
****He’s a little on the heavy side

yo bro, my bad, my internet was disconected last week, thanks for not bitching for the dq....ill start keeying right now

No problem. Take your time and good luck.

Tim asked chris for admin?
left my pants pissed from laughin, it will go straight to his head/
He’s Mexican yes? None the less its still your ‘day of the dead’//**

Don’t second guess wheres ya ‘army’? ina fight you’ll get burned tryna harm Ree/
Imma ‘vet’ in text<<……..the only ‘stripes’ you earned are on ya ‘long sleave’//

Fight with men ya screwed…
This light weight dude only beat his myspace crew, shame ya aimin my way tyke/
He just ‘pwn’d’ friends and ‘newbs’<<like in video games on the lames Friday night//

Beatin this geek aint fair, his writs been ‘used’ like spare change at charity concerts/
Homie ill defeat you square……
………… the only streak you’ll bear is the shit stain on every pair of ya boxers//**

I bring heat can’t you tell son, for fun I’ll leave the fag ‘spun’ like a ‘frisby toss’/
After this defeat you’ll be ‘well done’<< but son’ll have (ate-one) ‘chrispy’ loss//(8-1) **

** Don’t know if he’s actually Mexican, but day of the dead is a celebration in mexico
** Hes on a winning ‘streak’
** His record is 8-0 with a loss it would be 8-1

good battle bro, nice drop

uppin for votes!!

BUMP

Chris:

"Class" is in session, here's a (lesson kid, peep)... I got groupies, if you "turned a fan on" you were (“catchin’ a breeze“)
There’s “no time” to teach Dan all the “basics“, so like his name I'll (“end him with ee’s“)*
^^This Was A Nice First Bar And Nameplay Was Just A Bit Stretched
Beat him with glee, -audios- must be wack when you already sound fucking (gay in ya raps)
They’d rather hear my shotty-blow than listen when “D talks” unless it's (Dre on the track)**
^^Nice Nameplay In This Again Wasn’t The Hardest Bar But Definitely On Point
Thinkin' your raps are (astounding? This geeks hardly)… (amounting to heat, I’ll be)…
(Jus pounding his weak bars, please,) in this we’ll “see D drop” with no (“album release party”)
^^Rhyming Was On Point Another Nameplay Nice And Personal
When it comes to dope, they (yellin‘ for Cas in ya town) while I’m im(pelling ya ass to the ground)
My punches jus keep hittin’ “re up” like (“sellin’ the last of a pound”)***
^^This Punch Was More Witty Than The Others Nice Nameplay I Thought The Set Up Could Be Better
His (shitty ass punches) are (pretty redundant), crying about everything and (bitching in public)..
So I told him to be the “bigger man“, I see he took it to heart...neck…(titties and stomach)!****
^^Lmfao. Nice Closer. Way To Get Dirt On Dan And Get Personal.

Dan:

Tim asked chris for admin?
left my pants pissed from laughin, it will go straight to his head/
He’s Mexican yes? None the less its still your ‘day of the dead’//**
^^Nice Rhyming But The Personal You Tried To Draw Up Was A Reach
Don’t second guess wheres ya ‘army’? ina fight you’ll get burned tryna harm Ree/
Imma ‘vet’ in text<<……..the only ‘stripes’ you earned are on ya ‘long sleave’//
^^Set Up Was A Little Of An Upper On Your Side Not The Hardest Bar But Good
Fight with men ya screwed…
This light weight dude only beat his myspace crew, shame ya aimin my way tyke/
He just ‘pwn’d’ friends and ‘newbs’<<like in video games on the lames Friday night//
^^Most Of This Bar Was Filler For Me Which Ended Just Decent
Beatin this geek aint fair, his writs been ‘used’ like spare change at charity concerts/
Homie ill defeat you square……
………… the only streak you’ll bear is the shit stain on every pair of ya boxers//**
^^Good Bar But A Little Generic For Me The Streak Thing Is Played
I bring heat can’t you tell son, for fun I’ll leave the fag ‘spun’ like a ‘frisby toss’/
After this defeat you’ll be ‘well done’<< but son’ll have (ate-one) ‘chrispy’ loss//(8-1) **
^^Your Best Bar In Your Verse Pretty Creative And Got Personal Good Closer

Opener: Chris
Closer: Chris
Punches: Chris
Multis: Chris
Wordplay: Chris
Personals: Chris

Overall: It Wasnt A Blowout As It Looked On The Categories. Dan Had Good Stuff, Chris Had Good Stuff. I Enjoyed Chris Verse More Than Dan's, He Had More Wordplay And Better Punches.. Some Of Dan's Didnt Hit So Hard. Personals Were Pretty Even I Just Thought Dan's Were Just Implying Something Rather Than Dissing Him. This Was A Good Bout But It Was All Chris In This One

Vote: Chris

Vote, please.

"Class" is in session, here's a (lesson kid, peep)... I got groupies, if you "turned a fan on" you were (“catchin’ a breeze“)
There’s “no time” to teach Dan all the “basics“, so like his name I'll (“end him with ee’s“)*
- Was a nice opener here, Landed as a good personal with the nameplay punch.. The only thing I didn't like so much was the loose multi rhyming though it was a solid bar nonetheless.

Beat him with glee, -audios- must be wack when you already sound fucking (gay in ya raps)
They’d rather hear my shotty-blow than listen when “D talks” unless it's (Dre on the track)**
- Oooh, This was clever.. Nice metaphor here with the nameplay.. Good punch, I like the creativity.

Thinkin' your raps are (astounding? This geeks hardly)… (amounting to heat, I’ll be)…
(Jus pounding his weak bars, please,) in this we’ll “see D drop” with no (“album release party”)
- Another nice nameplay twist.. I've read a similar concept before but you've made it your own here and it lands as a personal. Decent punch.

When it comes to dope, they (yellin‘ for Cas in ya town) while I’m im(pelling ya ass to the ground)
My punches jus keep hittin’ “re up” like (“sellin’ the last of a pound”)***
- Pretty decent here although without the footnote I'd not have gotten it so that diluted it slightly.. Still a solid bar though once I understood it.. Good personal nameplay again.

His (shitty ass punches) are (pretty redundant), crying about everything and (bitching in public)..
So I told him to be the “bigger man“, I see he took it to heart...neck…(titties and stomach)!****
- LOL Damn, Good personal to close your verse.. Solid heavy hitting punchline. (no pun intended)


Tim asked chris for admin?
left my pants pissed from laughin, it will go straight to his head/
He’s Mexican yes? None the less its still your ‘day of the dead’//**
- Not too bad here Dan, Decent opener though could have been molded so it landed a bit harder.. Good personal though.

Don’t second guess wheres ya ‘army’? ina fight you’ll get burned tryna harm Ree/
Imma ‘vet’ in text<<……..the only ‘stripes’ you earned are on ya ‘long sleave’//
- lol Clever personal diss on his photo.. I liked the flow in this bar.. Solid punchline

Fight with men ya screwed…
This light weight dude only beat his myspace crew, shame ya aimin my way tyke/
He just ‘pwn’d’ friends and ‘newbs’<<like in video games on the lames Friday night//
- Not too bad here although I'm not sure how personal this bar landed.. Do you know that he plays games on fri night or was that just speculation? I feel the punch lacked a bit of weight here nonetheless.

Beatin this geek aint fair, his writs been ‘used’ like spare change at charity concerts/
Homie ill defeat you square……
………… the only streak you’ll bear is the shit stain on every pair of ya boxers//**
- LOL This was a solid personal!! That's what I've been hopin' to see from you all the way through bro.. Nice punchline man, Got me laughin'.

I bring heat can’t you tell son, for fun I’ll leave the fag ‘spun’ like a ‘frisby toss’/
After this defeat you’ll be ‘well done’<< but son’ll have (ate-one) ‘chrispy’ loss//(8-1) **
- lol Another good bar here.. The punch could have been worded slightly better but you still got the point across well enough.. Solid personal punchline to close your verse off.

Opener - Chris
Closer - Tie
Punches - Chris
Personals - Chris
Multis - Dan (Didn't have as many but they weren't forced at all)
Wordplay - Chris
Flow - Dan

Overall - Chris came with a pretty solid verse chalk full of nameplays and clever punchlines, His game was well rounded in every area although I wasn't diggin' his flow as much as Dan's and his multis were forced in a few spots.. Other than that solid verse. Dan came with a decent verse as well.. Lacked a personal in one bar though and that cost you.. I think Chris came a bit harder and more clever with the punches all around although Dan had a couple solid ones like his last two bars, Unfortunately Chris came pretty heavy in every bar and that's what leads me to lean toward Chris for the winner.. Was a solid match though fellas and I think a rematch soon would be sick to see.

Vote - Chris

Yeah, my flow was ass in this one. Lol. Thanks for the votes Zain, Tim. Keep em' coming.

yeah i figured aa much i wrote the shit in lke half hour, were def having a rematch bro, and imma take some time.....good verse tho bro, and thanks for voting zain an tim, much appreciated

chrispy...

"Class" is in session, here's a (lesson kid, peep)... I got groupies, if you "turned a fan on" you were (“catchin’ a breeze“)
There’s “no time” to teach Dan all the “basics“, so like his name I'll (“end him with ee’s“)*
(YO THAT OPENER WAS TIGHT GOT VERY PERSONL WITH THE NAME PLAY)

Beat him with glee, -audios- must be wack when you already sound fucking (gay in ya raps)
They’d rather hear my shotty-blow than listen when “D talks” unless it's (Dre on the track)**
(AGIAN NICE NAME PLAY AND NICE FLOW)

Thinkin' your raps are (astounding? This geeks hardly)… (amounting to heat, I’ll be)…
(Jus pounding his weak bars, please,) in this we’ll “see D drop” with no (“album release party”)
(NICE PERSONAL AND GOOD PUNCH TO FINNISH IT OFF)

When it comes to dope, they (yellin‘ for Cas in ya town) while I’m im(pelling ya ass to the ground)
My punches jus keep hittin’ “re up” like (“sellin’ the last of a pound”)***


His (shitty ass punches) are (pretty redundant), crying about everything and (bitching in public)..
So I told him to be the “bigger man“, I see he took it to heart...neck…(titties and stomach)!****
(HAHA GOOD CLOSER GOT VERY PERSONAL I LIKE THAT CLOSER)


Tim asked chris for admin?
left my pants pissed from laughin, it will go straight to his head/
He’s Mexican yes? None the less its still your ‘day of the dead’//**
(GOOD OPENER BUT I WAS NOT FEELING THE PUNCH THO SORRY MAN)

Don’t second guess wheres ya ‘army’? ina fight you’ll get burned tryna harm Ree/
Imma ‘vet’ in text<<……..the only ‘stripes’ you earned are on ya ‘long sleave’//
(GOOD WITH THE PERSONAL ON HIS DP GOOD PUNCH MUCH BETTER THEN YOUR OTHER BAR)

Fight with men ya screwed…
This light weight dude only beat his myspace crew, shame ya aimin my way tyke/
He just ‘pwn’d’ friends and ‘newbs’<<like in video games on the lames Friday night//


Beatin this geek aint fair, his writs been ‘used’ like spare change at charity concerts/
Homie ill defeat you square……
………… the only streak you’ll bear is the shit stain on every pair of ya boxers//**
(HAHA GOOD PUNCH AND NICE AND PERSONAL)

I bring heat can’t you tell son, for fun I’ll leave the fag ‘spun’ like a ‘frisby toss’/
After this defeat you’ll be ‘well done’<< but son’ll have (ate-one) ‘chrispy’ loss//(8-1) **
(BEST BAR OF YOUR VERSE FUNNY PERSONAL AND GOOD FLOW I THINK)

CHRIS..opend with the better punch but REE closed better but over all close battle but i think CHRIS takes this one all of his bars were spot on but very close good battle guys.

VOTE: CHRIS

I'm always down. Good battle, Ree.

Chrispy wins 3-0

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